tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2411322730177677632.post5248235908443858526..comments2022-11-12T02:26:26.816-08:00Comments on The Next Step: WelcomeHillbloggerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02883942521711152056noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2411322730177677632.post-87218926347875942382010-01-13T12:41:03.515-08:002010-01-13T12:41:03.515-08:00Wow, Hill. A great perspective and some great plan...Wow, Hill. A great perspective and some great plans.<br /><br />I'd like you to work on sentence combining in the future--try making your sentences more complex.<br /><br />Good luck!<br /><br />DJBCap'n Fatbackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16842687404949367461noreply@blogger.com